Kb inspired me. i must say though, i don't like the constraints of 10 syllables, i much prefer a freer verse. I was thinking of a friend or two while i wrote this.. ______ Throughout the course of this that we call life, There are days, regrets, we wish to undo. Yet amidst all this pain, through all this strife, There will be someone there, one tried and true. One who puts up with your cries and your angst One who will save your life, end your self-hate One who you think of when you’re giving thanks One who comforts you as your sobs abate. A friend who can change your tears to laughter A friend who can simply bring the joy back. Remember, find them, and from then after, They’ll be there, light your way, when the world’s black. So if the world is dark, just find that friend, Because if it’s not right, it’s not the end.
Abit long for a sonnet, but iv already told you that one One thing iv learned to stop doing it have 'because' in my sonnets. Im not sure why iv stopped that, but it seems better without them, and if you use them never use then on the first word of a stanza. Other then that, wonderful work