Walking

Discussion in 'Halo 3 Screenshots' started by Insane N krazy, Oct 26, 2009.

  1. Insane N krazy

    Insane N krazy Ancient
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    Hey im new i staged this screen on sandbox. Its pretty simple and amatuer(spelling), but its my first real screenshot. Please rate 1-10. All contructive critism and tips are welcome. Btw it looks better expanded.
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  2. SargeantSarcasm

    SargeantSarcasm In Loving Memory
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    I'm going to be blunt as I think it'll help you more.

    The colors are nice, but because the person is so small (relatively speaking) he doesn't stick out much, which is what you need for a picture where the main focus isn't meant to be subtle (like eerie eyes in the background or a hand reaching up out of the ground). furthermore, because the person doesn't stick out much, them walking sideways, and with the camera pointed to their backside (as opposed to seeing his chest and arm), makes them blend in more which makes the effect of a person being there negligible. It would've looked better if the person were walking towards/away from the camera, bigger and walking the opposite direction, or not there at all.
     
  3. Insane N krazy

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    Thanks for the feedback. What i meant to do in the screen shot was show a person walking across like a desert or somthing to that effect. Although i did screw up the camera angle and i was far away. Ill consider these tips in my next screenshot, and this encourages me to do more.
     

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