NOTE : I actually HATE Naruto, but Grave Robber is tutoring me and this was our assignment. I wanted to ask you guys how you think it came out, I was never really good with eyes so please disregard them! I'm quite pleased with how it came out, GR said that the details on the shirt were optional but I wanted to do it. =]
IMO the head looks lopsided, same with the hair. Make his hair hang down lower, make his head more symmetrical, add more detail to the collar to tell it is a collar, and make the headband part bigger... Btw I hate naruto too, but itachi cooler for drawing.
1st assignment? if so, good job. I'm taking 2 college art classes right now so i kno wat outcomes show a pace of growth and development. so, essentially, i believe RC was a bit hard on critique but still honest. no matter tho, a good drawing for a 'novice'. ha
@Fraust : Yeah, 1st assignment. Thanks btw. An honest critique is all I need to improve. xD @RC : Yeah, I see where it looks a little lopsided and about the hair, it took me like 10 tries to just get it where it is now, then another 5 to get the curve right where it goes into the headband. So I thought it looked fine the way it was and moved on. I should have probably made the collar on the left a little skinnier but oh well.