I have no idea what I'm talking about with graphic design, but the text on this piece doesn't really make sense to me. Usually things ascend to heaven, not from heaven.
Git rid o' dat text, kill those scanlines, add some better lighting and direction, and some effects! Cheeuya boah!
Ascend (verb) 1. to move, climb, or go upward; mount; rise: The airplane ascended into the clouds. Descend (verb) 1. to go or pass from a higher to a lower place; move or come down: to descend from the mountaintop. Enough being a **** ;D Text is very hard to read, although it is READABLE, I had to strain to get "heaven", and barely noticed the red text in the bottom right corner... a bit cluttery.