Meh ... just ok. Don't like the music but thats your opinion so im not gonna go to far with that. The editing wasn't good. There was no syncing or effects. the transitions between clips seemed a little to suden and the clips them selves were morefuntage material rather then mntage. Not bad for first but...just work on editing and stuff.
Nice video, how did you do the glitch at the end with the elite and the skull? Or is that the default actions, if it is ive never seen that before lol ;p
Have you considered using other editing programs? Movie maker isn't what I'd use to show off clips personally, have you tried sony vegas or adobe after effects?