After I put up my first work in photoshop up here, I got some negative feedback, and after sowing my creative oats for a little bit, I have come with these, and I would like some CnC on them 7th Sanctum (my clan's name) The World In Your Hands
I really don't like the grainy look in either of them and the text is horrible on both of them. The first one has no good focal point. The second text doesn't even make sense how it says "the world in your hands" but the hands are holding a Saturn-like planet. Though I do like the hands themselves. Did you make those from scratch or manip them in Photoshop?
I like the second one, you should change the text to fit the style more, and if you find something that actually works, it'll be a great image!