Text is Horrid IMO. Effects are amazing. Great flow man, loose the text and fill the right, or just completely redo the text. EDIT: You dont even really need to fill the right, just get rid of the text
Decrease the opacity of the black bow surrounding the text. Here's a suggestion of mine for your text: - Make a clipping mask for the text - DO NOT move the 'clipped' image - Brighten the 'clipped' image. Awesome effects you have here. Love the style.
No, I'm kinda fed up with text. I'll definitely try that in another sig, though. V4: Fixed the goofy border.
the text ruins it as has been pointed out but also im not to big on the colors personally maybe see how a black and white image looks?
Well Everyone is just telling you to lose the text, but not actually showing you what's wrong with it, so it's not really helping you improve... So. Here yah go. Maybe this'll help. EDIT: Also. When in doubt about color, use white. Black doesnt work well often. But white works 90% of the time.
Yes ZCT, thank you. But our text is in another castle! Hehe, anyways, thanks for the tips, but I really felt I wanted something fresh and possibly VISR feeling. However, I failed miserably.