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  1. Icecikle

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    yeah...suggestions? comments?
     
    #1 Icecikle, Sep 24, 2009
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    Commented on DA.
     
  3. Hari

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    I really like what you did, but it would be better in higher res imo. and cropped i guess as well.
     
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    commented on dA, but i gotta say, the quote is meh.. could have been better.. and its more focused on the cliff, like whisper said
     
  5. Icecikle

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    not to call you out specifically on this because others do it too, but that is spam, I wish that people wouldn't do that, just post what you posted on DA here or just pick one place to post.

    anyway, fixing to up date with some lighting fixes.
     
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    No post count means
     
  7. Icecikle

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    I know that some of you think this is just another off topic, but its not, so shut it with that.
     
  8. Black Theorem

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    Is it just me, or does the jumper look too big compared to the cliff?
     
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    The main issue I have with this LP is that the top of the cliff is blurred, and the size of the jumper in contrast to the cliff, and his location. One would not be that close to a cliff after jumping off and soaring on your chest. In general, he is a tad bit large. Not a huge fan of the unnatural looking lighting either. His face is difficult to see, unless that is a lighting intention. Also, his jeans are jagged on the edges.
     
  11. Whisper

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    I don't think it is that. However, I will post what I want to when I want to where I want to. It doesn't harm anyone else if I post that I commented on DA, in case you don't notice it or log on DA for a while.
     
  12. Black Theorem

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    again, too big. just shrink him a little.

    In fact, cutting off the edges made him seem bigger too. At least, to me.

    Just a tip: right click on it, and hit view image. You can see it in it's whole that way. and it really seems like he should be smaller.
     
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