GentlemenReVAMP

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by Knight Kninja, Sep 23, 2009.

  1. Knight Kninja

    Knight Kninja Ancient
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    yeah, i did it again.. i love it, but im not positive on the lightbulb...

    darkened it for fh light..

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    v2
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    opinions? my least fav part is the lightbulb.. i like it otherwise.. for the few of you who havent seen my previous version of this:

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    and backstory, i drew the guy last year, so this whole thing is totally from scratch.

    if you wanna download the guy, visit it on my deviantart: The Gentleman by ~Kumbric on deviantART
     
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  2. Huntar

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    I love it.
    The only thing is that it seems, in a way top heavy.
    The signature is unbalanced.
    Fix that, and it would be amazing!
     
  3. Black Theorem

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    I'd do something unique with the feet to maybe balance it out more.
     
  4. l a v i u s a

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    hi , my friend

    wooow nice keep going

    ^^ see yeah
     
  5. Knight Kninja

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    Thanks guys! i agree, it is topheavy, il mix it up tonight

    Updated:

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  6. Juggernaut

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    I like V2 better. It's got action everywhere and it's not often you see a special shaped vertical signature. You should make a version of number 2 that doesn't have the light bulb. I like it now, but you can keep messing with it, you could find something better.
     
  7. Knight Kninja

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    mmk.. i tried removing it but it seemed too empty without a lightbulb, so maybe il do something else instead.. ideas would be nice :p
     

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