That was actually quite clever. Tone down the sharpness, just a bit. The colors are also a tad bland. Other than those two it's fantastic. I like this. It's really neat. Do me a favor though, let the colors come through a little in another version and repost. I wanna see what it would look like.
No. Looks cool. the grey stuff to the left (his right) of the engie is kinda weird. You play much TF2?
It's excellent. The only thing that bothers me is the little bit of choppiness to the top right of his head, other than that, it's awesome.