text id too flat.. with the flow you have i would try something different. next, you should definetly darken nemo's tail.. if its further away, underwater it would be darker
Hoo Haa Haa. Maybe some current-like motion blurs or smudges? TBH, I'm about as stuck as you on this piece. And yeah, make the text match the sig's flow. Maybe change the perspective.
Darkened tail. and Changed the text up.. I didnt really understand the text, but i tried to make out what you said...