Thicker Than Water

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  1. KratosAurion777

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    For this week's SOTW.

    Part photomanip, part regular sig. I am pretty happy with the result, even though it still seems like a dual-focal sig, despite the blurring.
     
  2. Knight Kninja

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    the text doesnt help at all.. draws way too much attention away, and yeah the oil drill (right?) on the other side distracts too.. too many focals
     
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    Good concept since i love the movie, but poorly executed
     
  4. KratosAurion777

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    I agree, the text does really mess it up, I am going to make a new version without the text and C4Ds shortly.

    Any suggestions on what specifically to improve?

    Edit: V2 and 3:

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    I really tried to address the dual-focal issue by increasing the blurring in v3, I am still not sure how effective it is...
     
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    the blurring didnt work, though the removal of c4d's helped as well..

    do you really need that in the BG?
     
  6. KratosAurion777

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    I don't have to have the oil rig in the background, but it seemed awfully bland with just the focal and a brown background...
     

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