If im honest i don't think its very good because it's very hard to make out. Also all it seems to be is fx, some smoke and a elite. I would say this is a 3/10.
Seriously... did you edit this picture, or is it just my eyes? Anyways, its boring. Try to think of something special.
What them two said. Try something overdone instead of this. You would see this on someones fileshare in matchmaking and they'd call it "Free Halo 3;ODST and Recon worthy".
its boring and doesn't stand out. i can barely make out the elite [or is it a spartan?], but i like the background you chose. it is pretty overused, i must admit, but taking sandbox's sunset to your advantage is crafty. and if this pic is edited [and i really think this looks edited], it should go in the graphics and arts section. someone could make a sig out of it, idfc.
It looks like you used an Elite with Asethic (sp) helmet. So I would suggest that if you could get the eyes to glow it would help.