High Flyer

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  1. Huntar

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    My main focus was to improve on text.
    I always use 1 particular text, i decided to try mixing it up today.

    See en See.


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    Yes, as shatakai pointed out the stock is VERY overused.
    Instead of saying a couple words, can you actually CnC?
    Be mean, i really could care less. I know i need to improve.
     
    #1 Huntar, Aug 22, 2009
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  2. RightSideTheory

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    Text is bad, it needs work.
     
  3. Shatakai

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    Overused stock is overused.
     
  4. Huntar

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    what does it need work on?

    Just Text? be moar descriptive please. :p
     
  5. Laxer

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    "HIGH" is good text, flyer isn't so great. Try a lowercase slim font.

    The lighting needs to effect the guy not just the general sig.

    Also not many effects but you said you weren't going for that :\
     
  6. LOCK.xcf

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    Bad CnC is Bad

    I like all of the effects but i don't like the text, either get rid of it, or experiment some more. try putting it closer to the skater or what ever he is. Also, i have never seen the stock...
     

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