Cn-Sizzle I like it a lot except for there is pretty much no flow to it. I haven't been in the G&A section on FH for a while. Been on other Forgining sites but I decided to come post this here cause no other Forging sites beat FH's G&A Section. Which is the only forum I visit on here anyway XD Anywho ya CnC plz
You should either blur the front, or the back, not both. It needs a border and I personally don't really like grunge brushes. I give you a 7.5/10.
I don't think it needs a border. A sig doesn't have to have a border anyways and I usually don't put a border on my sigs until I am totally done.
Here is a new version. Did some high passing and added a border and everything. And I think un blurring the drill looks much better.
I'm still constantly catching myself looking at his fist whenever I try to focus on the focal. Wait, is the head or the drill supposed to be the focal? Lol, this is a pretty bad stock/render. Oh, and I just realized how mediocre the smudging on the fist is. There is a solid line at the edge of your smudging. Looks a bit over-sharpened, too.
Ya I can't believe I screwed up on thatsmudging lol. And the Big Daddy is the focal..that includes the drill and face. But the fist is blurred cause it is closer to the POV. ^ Newest ^ btw I'm just wondering do you even make your own sigs? Cause I hate being commented on by someone that doesn't make sigs themselves.
1. Big Daddy is supposed to be the focal, but when you have a render/stock like that where main parts of the image are spread out everywhere, there appear to be multiple focals. Big Dadddy is three focals in one here. 2. The drill was better blurred. 3. I also think that the smudging/blurring around the fist is unnecessary. You should just have the fist blurred, and nothing else. 4. Yes, I do make sigs. I'm no pro at it, but I know what to look for in a sig.
I think it's great and that these other guys are way too critical. Better than I could ever do, that's for sure.
Yeah, we're too critical. Because, of course, "I think it's great," will definitely help MNM improve his work.
Ha ha ha, yeah, make a defined focal, because as it is now, it makes me go all wiggy. The effects are pretty good, if a bit over-sharpened, and the text needs some work. I'd take off the drop shadow, move it, and shorten it. Also, a different, more period font may look better. Experiment. And make that tube-ish C4D on the left flow around the fist, not over it. May look better.