GOOD MAP! a lot nicer looking than your original and seeing as the last is so fun i was amazed at how better this is. very well done and you look...
first things first, soory pinohkio but you make no sense! good map and although not asthetically pleasing, it is indeed very fun !
Hey prod, (tht feels weird !) sent you a friend request, luckily i havent been done for spam yet!
make your introduction a bit clearer, quite hard to understand.