Holy untextured floors!

Its hard to comment from only one screen shot and not playing the map for myself, but I'm wondering if you might need some cover. I would also recommend finding someone in the community that's good at atmosphere building, doesn't sniff their own farts and might be willing to help out a new forger. Maybe list it as a co-forge when they've made your map more aesthetic. It would be a great way to learn how to add a skin to your blockout.

Hope you manage to polish it up soon!