hello . i took a look at your map in forge and spoted a few things that could help the flow of your map .

• the bridge that has the halo 2 plasma rifle ,u can get on top of the map from this location.
• ctf location is ok but should have more routes leading to and from

your ramps are a bit dench.. its ok have some big ramps here and ther but try to mix it up some maby changing the angle from 35 to 15 or use actual ramps or stairs but if u use stairs make sure u have projectile blockers on them as no 1 really likes a nade coming back in d face, also try different sizes

there's few other things like the lighting and art but these are something that u personally have to learn through trial and error ..

hope anything i said helps...

peace

 

I think basically he's not saying there's anything wrong with the lighting but if you look at some of the better maps on the site the lighting and aesthetics in general are just on another level. As he suggests, to get good lighting on maps takes a lot of time and effort and is something that will take you a while to learn as a forger. Something I will suggest if you don't like the natural lighting and don't need to skybox is to box your map. This involves surrounding the map with 256*256 floor pieces which you colour black and put on emissive 0. Then turn light bake off on everything inside the box. This then provides you with much more control over lighting however you will need to do more with the lighting in this case or everything will be pitch black. Don't go overkill though or you'll get framerate issues. Lighting on maps is a skill that requires a while to crack so give it a shot and it'll help improve your maps in future