Nice! This map was a breath of fresh air! It's like someone spliced Haven and Guardian. Good show!

One problem is, there are some jumps that look like they should work that don't. It makes the map difficult to learn on the fly. Other than that, well done on the movement, sight lines, and aesthetic!

 

Pretty sweet. Consider adjusting your lights to be even prettier. Maybe use different colors or small lens flares.

 

Do what feels right. If your map is divided by teams, you could do red and blue. If not, maybe pink, purple, or gold. Don't do green.