The maps comming along since the first time i saw it back on iParanormals stream. Ill hold off on reviewing it for a bit till i can see some of the changes youve made recently. here are some thoughts i had:

• Spawning has been needing some work. but youve said you taken a peek at it
• Bases needed a bit of a redesign to remove some of the dead ends and to allow for better navigation.
• I see you changed the purple lift to rockets and thats good, it needed a bit of work
• Also i would probably reconsider have the OS right next to the sniper on the tower like that.

Beyond that i think the map is moving in the right direction. I like that you want to keep working on the map and make it better so im more than willing to help you out. post it to forged friday again and we can test it .

 

Now that I think you've gotten in to a point where you like the map or at least where the map feels to play the best yet, i would recommend seeing what you can do to clean up the terrain and the bases, some parts of the map feel a bit jagged and rough as well as the bases still having a bit of issue with sharp turns and no railing in certain areas. Id almost recommend lowering the bases a bit, and I would look in to may be pushing the bases back a tad or bringing the back wall in some. I think the basics of the map are there and if your serious about the map continuing i think its time to start really look in to changing or cleaning up the map as well as adjusting sight lines. if youd like to test this more feel free to keep posting id like to see this map improve even more than it already has. keep up the good work and the attitude to work and care for your maps

 

The most important thing to remember is at the end of the day its your map. and what you say goes. My approach over the last 15 maps I've made is that after i got to a point where people played on it and gave feed back id change up some stuff to see how that suites everyone while still trying to keep with my original theme. If you find a point where you have to leave your original theme or idea for the map i suggest moving on and creating a new map using everything you have learned from the last map you made. this way you can always be happy with the creation, once you start to change your vision you begin to lose interest in the map and the work become sub par the map isnt likely to get completed.

So work this map till the feed back begins to stray from your original theme, ask them what you can do to keep the theme or direction you had in mind and still make it work. if this cant be done you do not need to change your map from them. Accept that this concept has run its course learn as much from it as you can and implement everything you have learned in to the next new and original map from you. Be happy forging dont stray away in to something your not happy with the satisfy other people. this is probably the most important thing as a forger, at least it is for me. Im always up for people having fun playing on my maps, but just that my maps. If I change my original design so much based on feed back that it ceases to be the maps original destination I dont really have fun working on the map any more and move on with everything learned.

Just some thoughts. I have to keep in mind alot that not everymap is a winner, but you can learn something from everymap you make. So like ive said before keep moving with this map and ill help you achieve your goal, but dont let me or anyone else change that goal unless you want it, and then make sure your happy with the direction.