I think this map needs a lot of touching up to do. First off, I would either get rid of both of the Banshees, or at least minimize it to one. I would also move the Laser to a different location, otherwise I can see someone grabbing it and jumping into the Banshee, meaning, they now have one of the fer power weapons to take down a Banshee. Second, I feel like the map really needs more aesthetics. I don't mean more monitors, I mean more natural pieces. Maybe more bushes/trees or smoother rock formations. Some of the rocks just look as though they were just dropped randomly hoping no one would notice.

Just my thoughts. If you fix those, I would say that would improve the map largely.