The description sounds very cool, but the pictures are quite lacking to show the excitement of the map based on the description. Perhaps a few video clips from the xbox or screenshots show the map in action?

 

Looking at the video you shared, the idea of the map seems like it may play ok, but the lighting needs to be reworked. The red alert strobe lighting is too closely packed together and most to the point of seizure levels... lol Add a few "security" lights (box with two spot lights in separate directions of dim yellow lighting) along the hallways and a few of the strobing lights near the corners to guide players along the map. Strobing lights should be used sparingly. You could make some broken pipes in the map with steam/fog coming out of them as line of site blockers also.