I don't mean to be a debby downer, but you can't rightly call this Coagulation with how much you've changed and how far it is from the original. The bases don't look to scale and have been changed very much, you've got way too many trees (there are a total of 3 on Coagulation), and the terrain features just don't match the original closely enough. That said: Good job on most of the canyon walls. Some of it is still really awkward, but you managed some really interesting rock formations.
Thank you for your comment, i apreciate it, a forget to put the vol. Of this remake, and my intention is to make the most close realistic map to th original. Coagulation V6
http://www.forgehub.com/maps/coagulation-h2.1965/ I don't mean to discourage you, but I'm not sure how much closer you can get with Halo 5's Forge. I'm interested to see if you succeed.