Cubist Neophyte [Wall]

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  1. Whisper

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    Here we go, just a minimalist piece I made using a render for the cube that I fixed up a lot. Took about 4-5 hours.

    Res: 1920x1080
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    Res: 1600x900
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  2. Ryan

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    Dannng that looks really good
    It actually looks like a photo
    good work :)
     
  3. Whisper

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    Well, it's not really supposed to look photorealistic, but thanks.
     
  4. loshon

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    Looks pretty cool, needs to be more noisy, though.

    Noise looks good on Walls.

    Also, the far cube looks a bit jaggy and weird.
     
  5. KratosAurion777

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    I really like this wallpaper. You did a really nice job with the lighting, and I like the minimalist style. I am not a huge fan of the text placement, but the font is good and fits with the style. I think the text would look better if it was moved down and to the right by about 20 to 30 pixels... I can't really tell what you did to the cubes without seeing the render, but they look very nice.

    Overall, great work.
     
  6. Y35 <3

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    Were you the same person who made the "We are your friends" background?
    I really like your work.
     
  7. Draxfear

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    Yeah very good man. If you had lots of desktop icons I would see why you would want all that empty space. The big cube's left edge looks a little ruff, especially on the higher res image.
     
  8. Whisper

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    I don't see where it looks rough?
    And you don't need to have a lot of icons; I have a medium amount and am using this background.

    Yes, I made that. Thank you.

    I originally had the text in roughly that same area, but then I decided it looked cooler and added to the '3D effect' if it was between the cubes.
     
  9. Draxfear

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    Actually, I'm on a different computer now and i can't see it myself lol
     
  10. Matty

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    Looks fab, but i think the text is a bit hard-edged and opaque to match in with the rest. I also think that the edges of the back of the cube lines are a bit dark.
     
  11. loshon

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    Make the text glassy!

    Then it shall be sick.
     
  12. Whisper

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    I tried to fix the edges of the cube, but it was very tough to do so and none of my outcomes looked acceptable.
     
  13. Frag Man

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    The cubes, suck. Unless you can get rid of the black lines indicating the cubes edges, it will continue to suck.
     
  14. loshon

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    Spoken like a true Frag Man.

    He's kind of right, though. The cubes have room for improvement.
     
  15. Whisper

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    I didn't make them, but I'll try to take another look at it.
     
  16. Frag Man

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    Darn. And here I thought it was a cool wallpaper.
     
  17. M.Jelleh

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    Improve text for epic win. I dont likes the font.
     
  18. Whisper

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    I fixed them up a lot though. The originals weren't nearly as good.
     
  19. Cosmic Rick

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    ZOMFG too much white is killing the environment! Color invert for environmentally conscious people? Lol.

    I like it. Clean, sexy, and umm... clean. You might try reproducing the cubes on your own, though. It doesn't look like it'd be too too difficult, and you'd have better control over the aesthetic.
     
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    IMO, the text doesn't match anything else.

    I think it would look good minimalist w/o the text.
     

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