Poem and Haiku You're Beautiful You're beautiful like the crescent moon in a dark sky full of stars. You're beautiful like a warm summer day with the bright summer sun. You're beautiful like a bridging cityscape in the distant horizon. You're beautiful like a sunset over the ocean while sitting on the beach. You're beautiful like the blond hair, blue eyed girl I know. Thought about it last night, decided to write it down. It's about a girl I know and yes, she's blond and has blue eyes. =3 Haiku upon request. Beautiful sweetheart With blond hair and sweet blue eyes Her smile I gaze
never liked a girl with blonde hair/blue eyes.. but still its a good poem, very beautiful. i was thinking about writing a song about a special girl in my life.. maybe il post it soon. oh and way to go on bringing some variation in
Beautiful sweetheart With blond hair and sweet blue eyes Her smile I gaze I believe that's the five-seven-five Haiku. Correct me if I'm wrong. Btw, that took a minute or two to figure out.
Girl is totally girl, but it's debatable. Think about it, do you say "girl" or "gi-rel" like "pizz-a".
I'm not about to say its amazingly epic or anything but this line is quite repetitive when you say "beautiful" twice. I would suggest another term..