You need flow. Please oh please oh please! Give us flow! Other than that, they weren't too bad, but not too great either. You need flow, and borders, and depth.
Thanks I choose not to use boarders too...norm ha. And I can see what you're saying about flow, but really? You see no flow in ANY of them? I'm baffled lol.
Oh I see flow, it just isn't flowing. People do toss them around, but I was being serious in expressing my opinions about how he could make them better. I apologize for providing CnC.