CnC from Icequiem

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  1. Lord Terrax XII

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    Ugh... Mr. Kumar. You still haven't CnC'd mine.

    Here it is again.
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  2. R0FLninja

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  3. KratosAurion777

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    I am all out of inspiration to make these abstract ones... I think this might be my last one for a while...
    This one had hardly any hand-made C4Ds in it, it is mostly default brushes and some other brushes I found. CnC please. Also, if you could tell me what you thought in general about my abstract stuff that would be much appreciated. Thanks! :)
     
  4. HellsRequiemAMX

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    Nice sig, kinda too sharpened in some areas but looks good.

    Lighting is off but nice text, lighting should be above his head.

    Not a big fan of this one, the text is too sharp and the effects aren't that great, try making a bigger sig you can get more effects in.

    The sig looks too glowy, and the light seems too gray.


    Definitely your best of the abstract signatures, just a bit contrasted in some places.
     
  5. KratosAurion777

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    Which parts are too contrasted? The area around the really bright white spots?
     
  6. HellsRequiemAMX

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    The bright white spots.
     
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  9. KratosAurion777

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    Better?
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    This has a low-opacity solid color over it. I think it really lowers the contrast of the highlights. Another one, at much higher opacity, but I don't think it looks as good:
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  10. HellsRequiemAMX

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    Not a huge fan of this one, the lighting is really confusing because of your effects and the text just doesn't seem that great to me, and the sparkles are a bit too much and too far from the focal.

    Nice use of the fire stock, fits well with your render, just not a fan of the text in this one, other than that looks nice.


    New version looks much better.
     
  11. god4

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    This is my best work ever, I spelt my name wrong though :(
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  15. HellsRequiemAMX

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    What exactly did you do? And the text stands out too much, try again with it.

    The signature is really dark and the right side looks like negative space, try filling that up with some flowing effects without adding too much, and brighten it up, your light sources are too dark. This is also really monotone.


    Lookin good Lock, nice effects really fit, great depth as well, get some text in there if you can that would go nicely.



    Great effects but the text where it says HERO is a bit weird, take the caps off the HERO text and I post again, also your light source looks really dark and the colours are overall quite monotone.
     
  16. J4M NUTST3R

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    Thanks, any better?

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    #896 J4M NUTST3R, Jul 25, 2009
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  18. HellsRequiemAMX

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    I like it much better, good job.


    Top one looks much better, great colours and it looks great.
     
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