on flames

Hey, you used one of the stocks from your stock pack, thats cool . I really like what you did with this stock. The depth seems perfect. I looked really close at the flames and there seems to be nothing wrong with them. Good job with text.

 

No, she used two stocks from the stock pack, I believe. Anyways, like It, the guy on the right's eyes really distract from the focal, but the flames really work with the main guy's expression.

What font is the ON in?

 

*Fixed

I could take a guess on the font, but I know I will be wrong.

 

Once again, I love that stock for some reason.

I would have made the guy on the right the focal, though. Awesome face.

 

The flames end abruptly in a straight line on the right side, but other than that it's awesome

 

Are you serious, you used arial, I was thinking you used some downloaded font.

 

Yeah, that guy is definitely better for this sig. I'm just saying that if I had made a sig I would have made it revolve around that other guy and make the effects complement him.

 

Ah, I see now that the flame stock ends on the right, which looks kinda wierd.

I'm sure you have methods of fixing it.

 

???
Maybe smudge on a low rate and opacity. or use clone tool.

 

above the main flame that you fixed, it still ends a bit fast .

 

It looks like the face of the guy in back on the right is really stretched out. weird choice of stock btw. the rest is good though.

 

Oh contrare, my niave friend.

The colors. It's something about them that doesn't match the flames.