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Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by Forge|Designer|C13, Jul 7, 2009.

  1. Forge|Designer|C13

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    This is my latest image, after another thread which i have asked to be deleted as im keeping it all in this thread. So basically everything underneath here is trash, i don't like it and it was early work and i didn't have the correct software to do so. Now i have what i need and have now finished my first piece after the criticism i have got.

    If you could would you comment on my new image above, i hope i have done ok after the comments, please start with new image cnc: then leave your comment, thanks.




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    Original: Edit on the left: Right second attempt


    My first so Criticism is needed thanks..

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    Ok thanks to the edit, this is what i have changed right.

    Thanks, what software is that on? Fireworks, Gimp or Photoshop.

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    After listening to all your criticism, i decided to change the design, is it better or should i have just re-edited the original?

    Also do you think the lighting effects are ok? As I'm using fireworks i choose to burn and highlight certain areas as well as using a circular gradient.

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  2. Donii

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    Need a light sorce, And sharpen the focal a it, maybe blur the backround on a low rate.
     
  3. natu

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    Try using Gradient Tool. Choose FG to transparent, and chose radial as the style. Then make the gradient while on a new layer ontop of everything else. Either change the opactity or change the layer type to Soft light. sorry if it's too cofusing :D
     

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