That must be because of the C4D's. Darned third rate productions. I'll never trust them again. FTW! That was like, the first time. And it wasn't truly a CnC. I didn't comment on his signature, and I didn't criticize his signature. I corrected you, and said what I would have done if I was fixing the signature. Signature version!
Well, its alright, but I don't like the monotoness in this piece. The large chinese symbol thing on the left messes with the flow thats given off by the things going off her. The right side has some c4d thats just ugly like it is. There needs to be lighting. The text barely stands out and doesn't look good. You did a good job on the blending, but you need toremove some of the larger stuff to keep the focal on the woman. I guess it depends on the message you got out of it.
Looks good as usual, nice text, but the XOXO Amber part is a little choppy and you should fix that, also the render has some graininess on it, try fixing it.
With/out border, you tell me. Also CnC would be <3'd. Gonna be gone for a week so might see in morning if I'm lucky. Preferably PM your cnc otherwise I'll forget.
I guess I'll pm you the link cause I didin't read that before I clicked the quote button. w/o imo, very nice, however I don't like how the bg is so light and the render is so dark. It also looks so rendery because of that, which is never good. So just fix that and your good, text would be nice too.
Haha, if I go easy you won't get anywhere with my help lol. Off the bat I find that this is too contrasted and that can be toned down quite a bit, and your text stands out just a bit too much try using a more basic font and moving it closer to the render, also I recommend you stray away from the C4D's for a while, it really takes away the fun in Photoshop, overall it is pretty good for your first signature. I just thought I would give some thought on this. The V1 in my opinion seems too monochrome with the colour, but the monotone is just perfect, you might want to add some lighting in there, and take away the business of where you put your C4D's they can be quite distracting in some cases. I like your text in the first version a whole lot more than in the new one, just make it a solid colour instead of doing anything with the opacity, trust me it works a lot better and looks cleaner when its done. I think you should get rid of the border as well, definitely looks like one of those open signatures. I also prefer the first canvas size, it is just at a perfect size in my opinion. Yeah Ice and I have quite opposite opinions on things, so I hope that both our CnC can help you in some ways.
Haha, if I go easy you won't get anywhere with my help lol. Off the bat I find that this is too contrasted and that can be toned down quite a bit, and your text stands out just a bit too much try using a more basic font and moving it closer to the render, also I recommend you stray away from the C4D's for a while, it really takes away the fun in Photoshop, overall it is pretty good for your first signature. I just thought I would give some thought on this. The V1 in my opinion seems too monochrome with the colour, but the monotone is just perfect, you might want to add some lighting in there, and take away the business of where you put your C4D's they can be quite distracting in some cases. I like your text in the first version a whole lot more than in the new one, just make it a solid colour instead of doing anything with the opacity, trust me it works a lot better and looks cleaner when its done. I think you should get rid of the border as well, definitely looks like one of those open signatures. I also prefer the first canvas size, it is just at a perfect size in my opinion. Yeah Ice and I have quite opposite opinions on things, so I hope that both our CnC can help you in some ways.
Haha, if I go easy you won't get anywhere with my help lol. Off the bat I find that this is too contrasted and that can be toned down quite a bit, and your text stands out just a bit too much try using a more basic font and moving it closer to the render, also I recommend you stray away from the C4D's for a while, it really takes away the fun in Photoshop, overall it is pretty good for your first signature. I just thought I would give some thought on this. The V1 in my opinion seems too monochrome with the colour, but the monotone is just perfect, you might want to add some lighting in there, and take away the business of where you put your C4D's they can be quite distracting in some cases. I like your text in the first version a whole lot more than in the new one, just make it a solid colour instead of doing anything with the opacity, trust me it works a lot better and looks cleaner when its done. I think you should get rid of the border as well, definitely looks like one of those open signatures. I also prefer the first canvas size, it is just at a perfect size in my opinion. Yeah Ice and I have quite opposite opinions on things, so I hope that both our CnC can help you in some ways. notice: My internet just went insane on me and it posted a few times over.