duck

You gotta use smaller canvas's, Also get a border to take up some room. and erase the lines on his face. and dont use c4d brushes.

 

Its better, Make the border x=2 y=4 And maybe put the text in black on the left side near the ducks arm, because the left side seems a little bland.

 

The C4ds are a bit over used, I usually just use them around the Render or stock for a effect, not the entire signature, but V2 look much better too.

 

Make it horizontal. like my current sig, but on the left side.

 

Why does that look like the photoshop pen tool?

 

Its a c4d Effect brush. i had it in my early days.