First in a while..

Looks good, a bit long though, and a bit blurry,

 

I'd say his hand are more of a focal. But that's just me.

 

That's what she said!

The sig is pretty good, a little too blurry on some parts, though.

 

The focal is a bit too blurry, and the clipping masks or C4Ds around him look odd... Text placement could be improved as well; I would move it down by his arm somewhere. Overall, good work.

 

Stregthen the focal point and try sharpening the sig up a bit.