Sandbox Cendrillion

Discussion in 'Halo 3 Race Maps' started by SpEcTaCuLar Ra, Jun 15, 2009.

  1. SpEcTaCuLar Ra

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    Made By: SpEcTaCuLar Ra

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    Well here you have is the ultimate crypt race track with smooth turns and amazing scenery. The amount of darkness and light provided in the the map creates a great theme and goes well with the well made scenery on the map. The map can be fun for all game types. The whole track was made by me with some help from Goldman 010 for scenery and o0 Slik 0o for a tunnel idea. Includes an uncheatable destination also. Please give some constructive criticism and enjoy!!
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    YouTube - Halo 3 Racetrack ~ Cendrillion
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    Man-cannon hill after start
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    A large dip
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    Bank turn
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    Straight away
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    2nd Bank
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    Wall Corner Tunnel
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    Turn after Tunnel
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    Destination and Unique Tunnel
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    Back to Start
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    Well That's It. Hope You Like the Map!!!!

    Special Thanks to Goldman 010 for some scenery. o0 Slik 0o for the tunnel idea and x Dream 76 x for making sure everything was set right to be ready for gameplay.

    Cendrillion

    Battle Lasers

    Racetracks
     
    #1 SpEcTaCuLar Ra, Jun 15, 2009
    Last edited: Jun 30, 2009
  2. oO SLiK Oo

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    Amazing! Plus first comment, this is the best map in the crypt.So freaking smooth too. Gameplay was amazing on Battle Lazers. Good Job. 5/5
     
  3. WhyHelloThere

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    Wow... It's incredible that something this well forged could be done on the crypt of sandbox. It looks a little hard to get back to the beginning if you fall off though. It looks like a very fun map to play on. 6/6
     
  4. Silent oo death

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    Scenery... on a racing map???? With amazing aesthetics and smooth turns this will most likely be a feature. The map itself reminds me of the rocking roller coaster at Disney world. Congratulations 10/10
     
  5. last_chaos_7

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    haha I loved the rocking roller coaster at Disney! it was like my favorite lol (although it was like 4 years ago...)....

    Anyways this looks like your best map Ra! It looks really well forged as always and the scenery done by you and goldman looks spectacualar (lawl)... I can't wait to get to play on it.... although right now both Bungie and X Box live are down so I don't even know when i'll be able to DL this much less play this lol.... I was thinking about using a tunnel like that in the map i'm making right now.... I just can't seem to finish it though... I get bored after like 5 peices, I'm getting bored of forging so it will most likely be my last map...
     
  6. blackandblutoo

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    Oh My God. This is the best race map I have seen in a looooooooonnnnnggggg time.
    The corners, turns, walls! Everything is soooo neat and well forged.
    The race itself is awsome. The turns and tunnels look really fun.
    Thes map is easily a 10/10

    P.S that first pic is beastly. blue lazer! lololololololol
     
  7. sonofnight94

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    *cough* spam *cough*

    This is the best race map I've seen come out of the crypt. Although it is also the only race map I've seen come out of the crypt, that does not make it any less spectacular. I see nothing wrong with the map itself except one thing. The aesthetic structure is a little wobbly on one column. Not that it takes away from the smoothness of the track in any way, shape or form, and I can't stack those things either, but that is the only thing I saw wrong. I would DL this map if bungies "Content Sharing System" wasn't also down for mantienence like LIVE. 6/5
     
  8. mrcleanup

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    Nice job RA!

    You have put a very good race track in the crypt. This is a nice job to be able to be confined like you were with the walls. It seems to be really smooth and the tunnel seems to be really long. I wish that I could DL it right now. Would Love to see what you are working on next. Hope to see some jumps in your next track.
     
  9. Fousu

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    Hey, good for you for making a racetrack in the crypt, I haven't seen that before. That structure made out of tube pieces looks interesting, but I'm not sure if there's anything in this map that really catches my eye. Great map, I see you worked hard on it, but it just doesn't look that much different than all the other racetracks, other than the fact that it's in the crypt. I'll give it an 8/10, no DL for me though.
     
  10. god4

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    WOW ra, this is so smooth, and what happened to the huge **** you were gunna build in the center?
     
  11. AnF Knight

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    Amazing! Simply amazing. By far the best track in the crypt let alone one of the best on Sandbox period. I guess I should mention that this could also go into the catagorie for best of all time maybe! Great job I have nothing bad to say about it.
    5/5 by far!
     
  12. dennis1895

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    its always the same this has done before a tunnel and stuff.
    looks much like slik oo's typhoon map.
    im not saying you make bad racetracks but they are always the same.
    try invent something new and be more creative.
    to make your maps original.
     
  13. SpEcTaCuLar Ra

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    How is this not original, I mean a track with all these aesthetics, yet alone in the crypt, makes a track original. It is very difficult to try new things with such little space. And with the tunnel, I did post that the tunnel idea was from slik right, anyways try to see it in my point of view and maybe you'll understand. I don't see how all my racetracks are the same either but w/e.
     
  14. ShaddoBlade

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    I think this is your best track yet, Spectac. It's definitely my favorite. It's smooth, really fun, and just an all around good track. Then there's the fact that you made it in the crypt. That must have been a challenge. People keep mentioning the blue turn, but I thought it was fine. However, the turn before the checkpoint is a little awkward. Besides that, I loved the track. I can't wait to get a game of Battle Lasers on it. I look forward to your next one.
     
  15. SHAD0W F34R

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    I have to say a lot of what Shaddo said. The turns look nice and smooth. It also looks like it rides good. The only thing is the scenery that it looks a little sloppy.
     
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    This has got to be the best racing map ever built in the crypt. It fills up practically the whole thing! The turns and tunnels look great and im geussing that gameplay would be even better. All and all this is a great track 5/5 dude, keep it up.
     
  17. SpEcTaCuLar Ra

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    I know, the turn after the tunnel is a little difficult but is good in a way because it takes some skill for the turn, which is what I wanted. Believe me, you can take the turn perfect. Anyways, glad you like the map.
     
  18. Flair iz NasTy

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    This map is great spectac, definitly one of the top 3 crypt racetracks and is phenominal on the forging area. The gameplay on BL was decent, but the first hill kinda ruined it and it was much too hard to get a good start. It may just be me, but the blue turn bugs me because it is a bit sloppy and the ending also kinda ruined it. You know the feeling where your enjoying the track, and then suddenly your just like wtf what was that? Well that is kinda what it was like, and instead of using the tunnel from Surge you should have though of something different. Well I think you did a pretty good job and the map deserves a 4/5 rating, not one of your best but definitly a keeper :)
     
  19. xXDeepStabXx

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    Nicely done, you did in the crypt even, something i havent seen in a while. How unique, but the thing is that these kind of things have been done before, and it starts to get repetive and boring. The interlocking, the jumps, a professional like you should be able to figure out something new to do. 4.5/5
     
  20. Silva Sniper

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    My Review for Cendrillion :

    Enjoyment:This map is an aw some map that deserves more attention then it is getting.This map is a very fun map and it is very enjoyable.It is a sweet map that features many unexpected banks,turns,twists,dips,and hills.This is the map that you want to download and play again and again until you die.Not really that much but this is a great fun map and this map is very enjoyable!

    Balance:This map is very balanced and it supports battle tracks a lot here.Lasers are very open which makes for pure chaos.There are no un-fair advantages to any other racers.And nobody can easily drift inside and gain an easy quick lead.The finish line is very straight and well balanced.This map is very well balanced from my knowledge.

    Durability:This track is well bordered up and most players will not feel the need to break nor get an unfair advantage via breaking the map.The scoring system for the gametype that people usually race on are efficient and the usually is an issue and is always the case.This map is good,but not the best in Durability.

    Aesthetics:This map has some stunning structures and provides eye candy.It always gives people something to look at while you are flying by.And the finish line has some great aesthetics and lights.The structures are so original and great.This map has very very great aesthetics.

    Originality:This map is original,but not that much at the same time.Most race maps all feature banks,cambered turns,and dips and they all have used it to their fullest.I would like to see something new and not usually used like a jump.But the map overall including the sweet building are very original and makes racers say"Wow this is a new one."This map is not very original though but including aesthetics it is an original map.

    My ratings and final rating:

    Enjoyment:9.25/10
    Balance:8.5/10
    Durability:8.75/10
    Aesthetics:9/10
    Originality:7.5/10

    Final Rating:8.5/10

    Final Comments:
    This map is very fun overall.I love playing lasers on this map but it really doesnt support Battle Snipers.I liked reviewing this map though and think this map is aw some,.Great map Spectac!
     
    #20 Silva Sniper, Jun 23, 2009
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