Simple Metallica Animation

Yeh pretty cool. Should be a little slower imo.

Edit: Yes, much better.

 

Yeah it's very original, but the text could have been white with black outlines. That would look much better IMO.

I agree with LAXER, it really should be slower.

EDIT: Never mind about my last statement, you edited it already XD

 

make it slower,and let it last a second after the last letter is put on.

 

It seems like the 'M' is changing very so slightly after every other letter. It's not much but it is enough to divert my gaze.

 

Yes. Much better IMO.

I don't know if this is too much, but you asked for it. I suggest...uhm...putting an electric current in each of the letters after every letter is shown?

You don't have to do it. You asked for suggestions, I gave you one.
Or maybe instead of an electric current, maybe some fire?

 

hint hint, a little slower...

 

I don't know about the flame, but if it's the electric current then it could probably be like it starts from one point of the letter and goes all the way around it so it can meet at the starting point again.

(For each letter)

 

Ah it's okay, the sig already looks good anyway.
Nice job.

 

Might I suggest to make it look cleaner, you make a fade from left to right to show the letters and then the same after it's finished to make them not visible. Personally when each letter shows up instantly it makes it look hard and sudden, kinda like a type writer.