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Yo the top of your page is laggy because of the pictures you have posted there. Also, the story and such cannot be read because the font is far too small. You should fix that asap
the post is amazing, ill give you that, and the two scarabs is really cool too. Neither one is anything amazing, but they are both pretty good. The rest of the map though really doesnt have anything that cool in my opinion and i think it looks too cluttered.
Actually i read it fine, nor was it laggy at all. Pretty good map nothing to amazing, i would have to agree with the other guy, it is way too cluttered.
The pictures just make it look cluttered it really is not that cluttered very well evened out and the rest of the map isnot supposed to look amazing but it plays really well thanks for your comments
VERY NICE the scarabs are accually created very nice and neat and accurate. good job incorporating them into the map.. 4/5 the other parts of the map are a lil boring
if it is to small to read just click the image maxamizer bar thing at the top of the image you will probably be able to read it then and posting like a normal person is a statement that does not make sense everyone posts thier maps differantly because everyone is differant so a normal person really does not exist but anyway i like to post my maps a little more awesome than some people because i had three hours to spare and i was bored why does everyone say the other parts of the map are boring they are just like a normal map and atleast they are smooth and i have grass and wooden textures and gravlift elevators so why does everyone think the rest of the map looks boring? It still plays well and is pretty good to look at to so why is it called boring? oh well thanks for the posts.
That, My friend, is called S-H-I-T-T-Y constructive criticism. I love the middle, that's very creative to use the tin cups in that manner. I think you pulled off a great aesthetics/ competitive map. I see you spent a lot of time too, so the crappy criticism flares your temper a bit. I don't see myself reacting any differently if I were in your situation. Besides the fact that everything isn't aligned perfectly takes a tenth off. I overall truly believe that this map has some good jumps and game play potential, 4.9/5.
well most my last post was me being kinda sarcastic but i was kinda annoyed by everyone posting the same thing on both of the versions of this map (ok not everyone but enough people to get annoying) Anyway thanks for the posts and the critisism
So me and a few of my friends got together on ur map a little bit ago and did a few test rounds. Here is our review: Appearance 2/2 Master Piece- brilliant forging/ interlocking. The aesthetics on this map are some of the best out there. You did a great job working the smoothness of everything out. Game play .5/2 Uncomfortable- I hate to see a great looking map go down becuase of bad gameplay, but this just didn't cut it for me. The flow of the map just didn't work well. The scarabs are a little tight for combat and everyone kept falling off the map. The upper deck barely got used becuase everyone kept getting peppered by the snipers. The power weapons dominated the map, where the lack of BR's ( didn't see hardly any) made everyone rush the middle too often. Originality .4/5 Unique- This was a fantastic idea. The top part was a tad iffy, but having two scarabs fighting over that middle courtyard was awesome looking. Presentation .4/5 Entertaining- You did a great job presenting this map. Everything got reviewed and you gave great screenshots. Overall score - 3.2 Sorry man, the gameplay just didn't cut it, maybe remove top area and add some railings.
ok i will take into consideration what you said. And about the Lack or br's sorry i forgot to mention that you need to have br starts and no suicide penalty but once i fix my xbox i will begin a v3 and might take away the top area to make some rails and add more brs thankyou for the review