Foundry Defiance

Discussion in 'Halo 3 Race Maps' started by thepenguinod, Jun 6, 2009.

  1. thepenguinod

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    DEFIANCE


    Well this is my first racetrack/roller coaster i can't imagine it being competitive as in lapping wise but mabye battle tracks would work i dunno. Its got some interlocking , it's pretty smooth no really any jumps except for one very small one 1-8 people and i'm sorry if the
    if the pictures don't work its my first time doing this so i don't know.The interlocking may look messy because i used walls instead of boxes in the walls im and idiot i don't know what i was thinking.Well there it is.


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  2. porkstein

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    Wow, haven't seen a Foundry track in a looong time. Looks like you put a lot of effort into this, and looks like it would race well. It's a shame, because a year ago, this would have recieved thousands of DLs, but it seems everyone's moved onto Sandbox now.

    Whatever, great job.
     
  3. thepenguinod

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    thank you. I do have sandbox but i'm terrible with ideas on it so it is what it is.
     
  4. Konvicted

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    Couldn't have said it much better, except the map needs work. It looks very bumpy due to the lack of interlocking. I do see some, but there isn't enough. On foundry, interlocking is a must. It looks a bit rough. Maybe make a super clean version.
     
  5. boomerdude

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    ok......

    the map looks great but yes a little bumpy just by looking at the pictures i say this because i wanted to download it and test it but your link goes to a compleate difrent other race track on sandbox..... try to fix it because i think that is against the rules and i am too lazy to check if it is =P lol
     
  6. thepenguinod

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    Thanks for telling me i guess i got sidetracked and copied the wrong link the correct one should be up now
     
  7. SpEcTaCuLar Ra

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    This map looks like you have nice ideas but it needs some work to it. The map seems like it's rough in many places and the interlocking is off in some areas. Like the other guy said, maybe make another version of this but with cleaner forging and it would be a good map.
     
  8. Mr Garfunkle

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    In the second to last picture, the racers can simply cut across the track. You may want to fix that, it's a major shortcut. Other than that it looks pretty good.
     
  9. thepenguinod

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    thanks for the feedback ill make a v2 as soon as i can mabye even on sanbox because i ran out of items i think
     
  10. xDarklingx

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    I like the start it reminds me of a hillside bunker type thing. the second picture looks like its messy and not smooth but i'm sure its nice and smooth. Other parts don't look as smooth and i would expect you would fall off a few times but thats part of the fun. overall nice job maybe you would be more popular if you made something like this on sandbox. It might be easier to make too.
     

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