The render isn't very hq, either that or you blurred it. Don't blur the focal. The pixely stuff near the head doesn't go and the text is average. Good first sig tho.
i added a copy of the focal behind it, blurred. thats why it looks that way. and yeah i over-sharpened the face, i couldn't fix it cause i was too far into other parts of the sig and ctrl-z wasn't working lol thanks again dude
Definitely way over sharpened and blurred which kind of destroyed the quality of the sig. The text doesn't really fit either, no real flow or depth. The lines don't seem necessary. But it's good for a first, better than my first.