First Wallpaper

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  1. Miraj

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    I attempted to make my first wallpaper.

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    After Hari's CnC
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    After Hell's CnC
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    #1 Miraj, Jun 2, 2009
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  2. Hari

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    Its good except for the text in back looks pretty bad and you could have made it darker and more slick looking.
     
  3. EGP

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    I hate the text in the back, there is too much going on back there. Also I would have made the diameter of the spotlight a little bigger because it looks like the car is sticking out from it.
     
  4. Miraj

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    better?
     
  5. HellsRequiemAMX

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    It looks like the car is floating...
     
  6. Miraj

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    Updated.
     
  7. HellsRequiemAMX

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    It looks like you darkened everything in the bottom, try just making the shadow longer.
     
  8. Miraj

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    how else would the shadow be longer?
     
  9. HellsRequiemAMX

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    Extend the cars shadow without making the bottom darker.
     
  10. Lord Terrax XII

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    With an overhead lighting the shadow would be short and under the car... The lighting would have to come in at a shallow angle to get that long of a shadow.
     

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