i think the banner on this sig i made and the left side could have had a little more work but i dono what do you think?
Needs new text, and less sharpening, other than that, nice work, and just for one sig, try to make your canvas bigger , I will do a small sig one sometime too. The C4D's don't look like they are just randomly placed and the stock is really contrasted, also remove the banner from the signature maybe just make it a small icon below the signature. For the C4D's try doing something with less of a dense amount, maybe use less C4D's try smudging, it's more fun plus it gets you better quickly, try that out.
k, may I suggest a gradient map to join everything together better? Anyway, this is one of my faves that you've made, however the c4ds contradict each others flow and the text is just kinda out there. The c4ds also take away from the focal and seem a little over bearing for my liking. Hm...well I don't know who they are, but I don't like the large light lines going around them, just seems weird. The bottom could also use work along with the top right side and bottom left. The sides and bottom all have opposing flow which isn't good.
well i already know this is very ummm explosive, and i made it a while ago before some of my other sigs, its quite contrasting and overdun but i still think i sortof like it because it stands out so much i know for some people its too much but yea, id like to see what you think lolol lol enjoy
well its horribly over sharpened and the right side ruins the flow. but the rest is ok, good for a novice sig. If it just wasn't so sharpened. K, well its ok, but its kinda bland, and has no flow. The text is also kinda bad. I would suggest that you just make a new one, with one focal. Well, the effects are out of balance with all that stuff on the right side, and just a few on the left. The text isn't the best and the stuff on the right seems odd. I do like the colors tho. So, try balancing out the effects and some different text.
The C4D looks a tad plain, I can't really see much going on with it other than the main placement and some recolouring.
i still have problems with the gradient maps on gimp, can u please PM me on exactly each step what to do, because when ever i try it seems to have a very dark tint effect to what color i choose. THANKS!!!
Personally your first is more interesting because it is more original in style and different than the second which is a basic signature from appearance, the first is a lot better. The second looks like you stamped a bunch of C4D's on it and set it to lighten, which isn't very original.