This is my first race map, so don't expect it to be perfect, but i believe it is pretty decent. SHINESTORM This is my map Shinestorm, a racetrack map placed in the skybubble of Sandbox. This map works with RACETRACKS and RACETRACKS only. Mongoose Spawn Point First Banked Turn Straightaway to Turn Straightaway to Wooden Turn Wooden Turn Curvy Track More Curvy Track Very Sloppy Finish Line Oddly Angled Straightaway Last Turn Reconnection to Beginning Thanks for taking the time to read my post, please give constructive criticism! Download Shinestorm: Bungie.net : Halo 3 File Details Download RACETRACKS: Bungie.net : Halo 3 File Details THANKS 8D!
why is the wood not on fire??? lol any way this is a cool race map and i like the slick roads but the maps are just a bit bumpy.
Racetrack looks good, and very smooth. One problem i see is the finish. Really, i mean good track but wtf is with that finish line? Other than that, it looks smooth, flowing, and overall well forged.
wow amazing for a first map! I remember my first sucked like horribly lol. The interlocking looks decent and the whole thing looks double wide... can't wait to try it out =)
The finish line was my weak point, making it cheat proof isn't easy, but i'll try to perfect it next time.
yea a really good first map mine also was terrible lol a lil sloppy in some places and kinda looks bumpy but ive never raced so i cant say anything lol but good job
How can you have an angled straight away. Thats like jumbo shrimp. Nice map, the kill balls add a blinding aspect that is new for race maps.
Nice Track Love the track, I am putting this one on the FHTG Racing League Track List. We are always looking for racers and builders of tracks to join the Racing League. To check it out Just click on my Sig.
This looks okay, but I don't like the purple killballs, and some of it looks alittle sloppy, but its still better than my first tracks The finish line is wierd, is it cheat-proof? overall I'll give it a 4.25, very good first track
Lol, he never said it was his first map, he said first TRACK. Anyways, this is way better than what I could've done. I really like the overall layout of the track, and the killballs create some variety in aesthetics when playing. Good job again for your first race track. I actually sort of like the finish line, despite its sloppiness. I can't download it right now, but I'll try later.