Horrible text. Way too empty on the right side. Kind of looks like you slapped a render on a background and blurred the edges of the render.
Honestly i think it's pretty darn dry.... I mean it's really empty and kind of boring. Don't get me wrong it's not bad just empty
Second one is better. You're not doing too badl; the text has distracted from the focal, so that's why I suggested V2. If you moved the text to a non-distracting area, it will become much better.
The text is bad. Very bad. Never use that kind of font in sigs. Never place a render in the edge of a signature. I wouldn't choose that color scheme if I were you. I would have chosen a much more icy shade. Try experimenting with C4D's.
Yes I do agree with frag on this one. Never say never, unless..nvm. Yea..not the greatest sig in the world.. I don't want this to sound mean, but it absoultely sucks. -The render you used was rendered very badly -The render was placed in the wrong spot -There is absolutely no flow. The render was randomly placed on the background -The background is very plain and bland, there is nothing special to it. -There are no effects, c4ds, or lighing effects in the sig -The text doesn't fit the sig at all and you chose the wrong text Overall 2/10
Get some flow and use C4Ds. But not as the backroud, when you put a C4D in, before you do it, create a new layer. Then put the C4D in and move it where you want it ( usualy over the focal, when you put it on the focal though, erase it and leave it so the effect is like coming out of the focal) And then anchor the layer, and set it to dodge. Sometimes screen, grain extract, and overlay work to.