Killzone Sig I bring you, my 3rd sig posted on Forge Hub. To those who replied to my Frostbite sig, please tell me if I have improved. The result was pleasing to me and I think I did pretty well. V1: V2 (sharper): V3:
Once again nice job, I think the guy in the background could have something shooting out of his gun though
The focal really blends badly as with the guy in the background. I still like the bg effects, but you really need to work on blending especially on the left side of the guys. Also, the angle of the effects in the background is messing with the flow a bit... you need to decrease the angle a tad.
I like the effects more than the render, if you could just make the render sharper. The render in the BG looks a little out of place as well. Nice colour choices and good effects on the left side.
Very nice signature, I would get rid of the second guy in the BG. And maybe smudge or blur the back of the main guy. The effects are great, and the colors are alright.
I really like the background, but the two killzone guys don't really fit in at all. I think it would look better without the smaller guy on the left. Make the right guy bigger and blend him in a bit better. Perhaps put a red filter over him to make him fit better with the sig. Improved over Frostbite? I dunno. That one seemed to fit together better, this one has a superior bg though
Unlike everyone else, I don't like the background at all. It just looks like C4Ds and brushes. The person looks like a stock slapped on top of those C4Ds and brushes. Background need to have some sort substance that is related to the theme of the focal point. Why don't you just use a full stock? That way the theme is carried through out the whole picture. The C4D background would be fine is it reflected the render. Your background seems spacey and bright, almost has a retro feel to it, but the stock is dark and grungy.
This is the best version, the other two are too sharp, maybe sharpen this one about half that of what you did the others. Also the c4d or whatever right above the head of the second guy disrupts the flow. On the up side I love the left side its great; however, if you do sharpen this sig erase this part of the sharper layer because it will get over sharp fast. I would also try and blend the main guy in to the bg more, right now he looks like hes just sitting there, horrible depth killer there, mostly the arm towards the left side.