Foundry Cliffs of Dover

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  1. god4

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    Cliffs of Dover

    Ok, this is about two months old but I haven't posted it on FH and every other website is dead...
    I set this up mainly for battletracks but has been in a few tourneys.
    (Psssssssssst, go left at the beginning)


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    Start:
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    Under start:
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    Aesthetic cliff, straight away:

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    After the cliff there are 2 quick turns then the start ramp:
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    The first of 2 long smooth rolling banks:
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    Transition in between the two rolling banks:
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    Second rolling bank:
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    A small scoop after the second bank:
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    Next is the plain old wall bank:
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    A clean drop after the wall bank:
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    After the drop there is a cool bridge hill and the finish:
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  2. AIS Student

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    This is probably the best track I've ever seen on Foundry (I've yet to play it, but the screenshots alone persuade me). I could never squeeze those huge pieces on Foundry (Thank Bungie for Sandbox!)
     
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  3. Mr Garfunkle

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    Don't advertise your map and don't use such large font...

    The track looks great, a little short maybe, but I'll give it a forgethrough and edit my post if I'm wrong. Looks smooth and quick 8.5/10
     
  4. AItius

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    Wow, really? Don't advertise your maps. You can put it in your sig, but putting it in the post with huge font is just obnoxious and lame.

    Well, this isn't the best race map I've seen on Foundry, but it looks pretty good. The interlocking is great, and the turns seem smooth and fun. Looks like a great battle tracks map. The beginning looks a little cramped, though, with only one path and tons of mongooses. If you could change that, possibly by extending the start, this would be even better.

    EDIT: Definitely change the finish. It needs to be longer so that people can go through it at any part of the track.
     
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    Oh... sorry. I haven't been on in a while, I forgot some of the rules.
     
  6. last_chaos_7

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    Hey man this looks like a really nice race map it follows all of the "rules" lol... The banks looks smooth and quite fun and it looks uncheatable... I'll DL and give a better review after I see it and play it later =)
     
  7. god4

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    Yeah, I was thinking of making a V2, then I started a really nice slayer map then I got sandbox and I think I'm just not gonna do it.
     
  8. Meltyourtv

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    Before I further comment after I've played the map I have to ask this: In picture #8, if you fall off the track, can you get back on? It doesn't look like it to me, and you should consider making it so, because in battle tracks, it's more violent and you're more likely to get pushed off the edge. But from what I can tell with the pics, this map was very well made, looks smooth, and has a great layout. The name is kinda reminiscent of GH3, as well xD.
     
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    To answer the first part, at any point fallen off you can get back on.
     
  10. Hank102938

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    Looks like a nice map for foundry. I don't really see why you named it Cliffs of Dover. Those are white and nice looking, but foundry is ugly and gray & green lol. I like how there are longer streches of track unlike other foundry maps were there are mostly turns withouh much straitness. Does the track loop or is it just a one time around thing?
     
  11. X taco king X

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    Only thing I can say to fix is the finish line, make it as wide as the box not hald as big.

    4/5
     
  12. EpicFishFingers

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    It is extremely clean-looking, but the start looks a bit confusing. You actually had to tell us to go left, and I'd try and drive up that single box open near the start. But the rest of the course looks pretty good.

    Good choice waiting to post your map or it's be lost on the flood of sandbox maps. I'm doing the same.

    The finish doesn't look completely cheat-proof, and the map looks untidy from the start, but the rest of the map looks pretty much seamless.
     
  13. god4

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    Yes, the beginning is quite untidy, but I was thinking of a V2 where the beginning is where the stairs are currently placed. But the map is COMPLETELY cheat proof although it may not look that way...
     

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