The second one is easier to read, but the first one looks cooler. Are they hand drawn or is it all Photoshop?
I used Photoshop and experimented around with some various things, I could have hand drawn them, but I didn't want to scan into PS, takes too much time, especially the whole conversion and such.
Second one is easier to read but it looks overdone and plain, as if you've just used plain text and smudged it. Whereas the first one looks much more original and appealing.