Sandbox Ancient Ruins

Discussion in 'Halo 3 Competitive Maps' started by lgevo, Apr 11, 2009.

  1. lgevo

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    Hey this is my 1st attempt at forging. So there are a couple rough spots. hope to get some feedback. maybe some tips? thx

    maps kinda like a guardian or lockout.
    weapons
    4 br's
    2 needlers
    1 sniper
    1 grav hammer
    1 brute shot
    1 shotgun

    this maps is only set up for slayer and team slayer.

    here are some pics
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    here the link Download
     
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  2. Kurty66

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    Post your pictures at a a site like Photobucket and post them from there.
     
  3. lgevo

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    oh ok didnt know about that i will repost them in a few thx
     
  4. Manoukian1414

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    Hey if your going to tell him his pics are broken, at least tell him how to fix them.
    Here go to this website, Halo Screen Shots, type in your gamertag and it will get your picture, then click a picture, copy the BB code and then paste into your post. Also give a description of your map and a weapon list
     
  5. lgevo

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    ok sry about that i fixed the pics
     
  6. lgevo

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    Manoukian1414 thx for ur help... and thx dragon ninja.
     
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    does kinda remind me of lockout looks nice looks like yo put some time into it
     
  8. Manoukian1414

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    Hey no problem. Your welcome. First off Welcome to Forgehub. For a first map this is awesome. A little messy in places but thats ok. I would suggest in a v2 that you remove the arches and blocks from the tops of buildings. I understand it prevents peole from falling off, but at the same time it makes the map look messy. 4/5

    P.S. - Next time instead of double posting edit your origional post.
     
  9. Winterburner

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    The map looks very fine and truly seems that you've put some time in it. Aesthetics are very fine and gamaplay-wise the map seems to be very great. I'll DL.
     
  10. lgevo

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    Thx and yea i will see what i can do with version 2
     
  11. Smileetus

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    Excellent job for a first map o_O
    Going to download and take it for a spin =]
     
  12. lgevo

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    hah thx man
     
  13. Smileetus

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    No Problem =]
    Waiting for another =]
     
  14. Nat Riehl

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    I like how it's like a mix of Lockout/Blackout and a map I can't quite remember... it was suspended above Blackout.

    I give it a 4/5 because I think it should be smaller.
     
  15. IVIAJIK

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    nice looking map and forging but maybe use some more cover? that looks like the only flaw is the lack of cover other than the bases
     
  16. Phoenix619

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    Amazing design and forging, Alot of time must have gone into this map, great job.
     
  17. xxxREAL10xxx

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    This is the best map I have seen for sandbox yet 10/5
    I like the buildings and how they are different and you use the archs in ways I never would have thought of.
     
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    10/5 =2 WTF?

    Anyway you map impresses me, although you could do with fewer of those 'rails' like th other guy said. It looks a little messy but that can be improved on.
     
  19. Ghost717

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    This map looks very creative. I like the 2-story environment. 5/5 Keep forging
     
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    Wanted to let you know that I posted a link to this map in the new Hidden Gems section of the Site Update. I did this mainly because the layout is awesome. Some really nice design you've got going here, and I enjoyed it a lot.

    However, the actual forging is pretty rough around the edges. Lots of bumps and nicks that slow down player movement and made it feel a bit unnatural in some parts.

    Clean up some of the maps where your player would either have to jump, or jumps up a bit on its own just by running, and you'd have a really top-notch map. I realize you said this was your first time forging, but I want to encourage you to keep doing so, because you have a real nice style that I'd like to see developed further. the design is there, now just work on the technical aspects.

    Cheers!
     

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