What's My Age Again?

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  1. Whisper

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    I was listening to:
    [party]http://users.d2k5.com/Whisper/files/Blink-182%20-%20What_s%20My%20Age%20Again.mp3[/party].


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    #1 Whisper, Apr 9, 2009
  2. aMoeba

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    No text is better IMO. I like it but the black lines.. seem odd. Is he doing an uppercut?
     
    #2 aMoeba, Apr 9, 2009
  3. Whisper

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    What black lines exactly?
     
    #3 Whisper, Apr 9, 2009
  4. Icecikle

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    The way hes looking like right next to his head there's some lines that you need to smudge out. Also seems over sharpened is some areas and TOOO bright everywhere, IMO that is.
     
    #4 Icecikle, Apr 9, 2009
  5. aMoeba

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    The ones to the right of his face.
     
    #5 aMoeba, Apr 9, 2009
  6. Whisper

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    1. Where exactly are those lines?
    2. It's not oversharpened; the effects are spirographs. Like, this is a very simple one: http://blogs.scienceforums.net/swansont/files/2009/02/guilloche.jpg
     
    #6 Whisper, Apr 9, 2009
  7. Icecikle

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    Instead of spirographs use c4d's much more versitle. Anyway, they kinda look like the side of a door on the stock maybe? If you show me the stock I could tell you, but smudge the stock layer some there and it should remove them...
     
    #7 Icecikle, Apr 9, 2009
  8. Whisper

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    I know what C4Ds are, I've used them for more than 3 years. I chose not to use them on this, however.
     
    #8 Whisper, Apr 9, 2009
  9. Tex

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    The swirly black lines to the right of the guys face are odd. I noticed that aswell...Kinda like you free-handed the swirls (which, if you did, that's not bad, tbh)
     
    #9 Tex, Apr 9, 2009
  10. Whisper

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    They're just blurred, which you might be thinking is odd. I blurred them to create a sense of depth.
     
    #10 Whisper, Apr 9, 2009
  11. Tex

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    Ohhhhhhhhhh I see it nooow....
     
    #11 Tex, Apr 9, 2009
  12. M.Jelleh

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    Meh, it's not really that good IMO. the effects on the left are pretty good but I don't like the ones on the left. And I'm not a fan of the effects on the guy's face.
     
    #12 M.Jelleh, Apr 9, 2009
  13. Nightfire

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    This makes some sense.
     
    #13 Nightfire, Apr 9, 2009
  14. Icecikle

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    He meant right...
     
    #14 Icecikle, Apr 9, 2009
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