No flames/arguments this time

I actually kinda like it, but the text is hard to read. I like the vivid colors, that really caught my eye.

And nobody has every FLAMED you, they've given you CNC.

 

It looks good. Nice c4d, and the way it flows is nice. I wouldn't use it though.

 

I'd erase the C4D's covering the girl's hair. Then lower the opacity on them. Move the focal right a tad. Try smudging her shoulders. Text shouldn't be clipping masked in this case. Good start, could use more work though.

 

I think its cool, but those squares should continue all the way to the edge. It looks strange since they just cut out along with the glow around it.

 

I think it's because it's the edge of the c4d.

 

Exactly. And it looks a bit cheap so I would move it over or make a new square.

 

I suggest duplicating it and merging them together so it looks like one.