Army of Two

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  1. Icecikle

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    [​IMG]

    Help please...I kinda like how it came out, but theres always ways to make them better so...

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    #1 Icecikle, Mar 26, 2009
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  2. HLG FlashPoint

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    I like them. I think you should change the main colors becuz Green and red the best choice. Maybe black and white or just black.
    I like the background it looks very good but I think the characters need a color change.



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    I like the V2 very much, It looks very good and has a better color scheme. Good job
     
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  3. Actually cool

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    The c4d is too obvious for one thing. Your colors are also a bit off, I would work on finding two colores that 'mesh, better. Also, when doing two distinct colors a good guideline is to choose colores that are on the opposite side of the wheel.

    Good overall job, but you need to work just a little bit harder on colores, really.
     
  4. Frag Man

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    Focals are too far apart. I keep looking back and forth on your signature.
     
  5. Icecikle

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    any better, check the op for v2...
     
  6. iRaynne

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    The v2 is really nicely done; the color scheme makes it a lot easier to look at, but then again I liked the color blending you used in the first one. They're both great.
     
  7. Frag Man

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    It's better, but like I said, I keep looking back and forth when I see it.
     
  8. Icecikle

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    Your kinda supposed to, its a double focal, and a stock meaning I can't move them closer...
     
  9. Frag Man

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    NO! It hurts my eyes! I don't think a signature is supposed to hurt your eyes. It's like; Oh, heres a focal. Oh, heres a focal. Oh, here's a focal. each time I look at one side, the other focal drags my attention away from it, and vice versa. It's fine if you have a painting because there is no focal.
     
  10. Icecikle

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    Why did you put the thing about the painting in there?
     
  11. Frag Man

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    Because one might say a painting has two focals.
     
  12. Icecikle

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    But its not a painting, no ones even mentioned a painting...Either way I get what your saying, but like I said, I like it and I can't change it...
     
  13. LOCK.xcf

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    Meh, never been a fan of your new flower brush thingy. IMO its pretty bad. Cut some off the top too.
     
  14. Icecikle

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    Just one quick question, do you ever say nice things?
     
  15. LOCK.xcf

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    Yes, i do, when i see something i like in a sig, i see nothing i like in this sig. I don't want to come off as an ass hole, i just don't like your style that much, you don't have to get offended by it. All i said is i don't like that little flower [or what ever it is] effect, i'm just not into it. Not every one is going to like all of your work, and you have to keep that in mind.
     
  16. Icecikle

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    No, I didn't get offended but I haven't seen you say anything nice about anyones sig since I came back a couple of weeks ago...
     
  17. Frag Man

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    Does it have to be? A painting and this signature have a lot in common. They're both art, and they both have colors.
     
  18. Icecikle

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    You have a point, but painting is much harder...
     
  19. Frag Man

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    This is a step towards that. Much like signature making, you have to learn how to blend colors.
     
  20. LOCK.xcf

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    Without an undo button.

    Now that would come in handy.
     

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