How's my first attempt?

this is actually above average for a noob. nice focal placement, text, and render. it is a tad boring, though, and untouched. much better than mine or a lot of other first attempts i've seen lately.

 

Yeah, The Only Thing That Is Boring how the mongoose looks plain.

 

you look plain. but awesome comebacks aside, it's not exactly the mongoose, but the weak left side, and lack of depth and effects that makes it kind of dull. what program are you using?

 

Thats actually really good for a first. You dont want to see mine ><

Focal, Border, Text and coloring is good but its kind of boring.