Foundry Project 137

This thread is DEFINATLY not up to forgehub standards, if you even care about this thread, I advise that you add a MAP? Along with some pictures and a description or its going to be locked in 24 hours.

 

Sharrow, since you failed at telling 'aha123' how to embed pics and just flat-out said "This post isn't up to standards BLLARRRG I'm going to eat your forhead" (Yah I know it's not what you said) aha123 said he would fix it, disregarding that, basically, saying fix them even though you are you doing so is spam to the inth degree in my book.

Posting the images, (just in case you don't know how and since Sharrow failed at it.)

1. Upload pics to photobucket or imageshack (do this by taking screenshots, click on them at Bungie.net get the full screen of the image, save the picture and click 'Upload file' on photobucket and/or imageshack)
2. copy the IMG code to your post and embed it.

 

Try uploading the photos up to www.photobucket.com, it's very easy to use and the pictures upload very quickly, you just have to save them to your computer from www.bungie.net 1st.

also links are easy to put up, theres a button called hyperlink that you can use or just paste a link. You don't have to use HTML crap on these forums.

 

Ateast you got one working pic up, but someone might be coming along looking at your map and thinking 'Wow this is great I can't wait to pwn noobs til daybreak on this map!' but, to there suprise the link doesn't work, so now they're all like 'Maybe my BR will have to wait to pwn those noobs...'

Bottom line, the link doesn't work, you've made some progress with the pics but you're half way there for this post being acceptable in gods eyes (I'm Atheist.).

 

You have nice interlocking skills but the map is too open. It would help if you added cover like a box/dumpster/crate around the open areas. 3.5/5

 

Alright, from a quick glance of the pictures, it looks like your map is pretty open, everyone can tell. You have WAY TO MANY VEHICLES /caps, if you want people to always have a vehicle, just set it to a low respawn time. I see you have some interlocking, and I guess that tells me you could do something with this, but right now I don't see any chances for this map to be fun for much more than 5 minutes waiting for someone to get out of matchmaking or something.

For your next maps, include more geometry and less vehicles, also, more bird, bird, bird is the word.

 

Dont you think foundry would be a little too small for vehicles like that. good job on the concept. work a little harder on bringing it back to life... on another map?.. Avalanche... or maybe foundry butt less wart hogs. youll get better. you could also do this better on sandbox because it offers more objects to work with.

 

Well, this thread is really not up to the standards here at forge hub, also the pictures really don't tell the story of the layout or the weapon spawns. I really think you should take some more time on your threads and your maps. There are those of us out there that spend over 3 months at a time on our maps and they get pushed off the front page from garbage like this. 1/5​

 

Okay. In order of importance. First is the worst.

Way to open. You have a lot of money left. USE IT!.

To many vehicles. If you want a vehicle battle make sure that you dont put Mongoses and Warthogs. No good.

Only four pics. You need more.

You left the hallway open and no pics of it.

In all it sucks. Learn from the best and adapt.